The line graph below shows the changes in the rate of sales of Gold in Dubai in one year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparison where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the rate of change in the
sales
of gold in Dubai in 2002.
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Overall
, it is clearly seen that the Linking Words
sales
show a huge fluctuation every Use synonyms
month
.
Looking at the details, in the initial Use synonyms
month
the sale of gold is 200 Use synonyms
million
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dirhams
which rise to 350 Use synonyms
million
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dirhams
in the Use synonyms
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of May. In April, the Use synonyms
sales
significantly decrease to 250 Use synonyms
million
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dirhams
and keep on decreasing till the Use synonyms
month
of July 110 Use synonyms
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dirhams
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In August the Use synonyms
sales
increase to 200 Use synonyms
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dirhams
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dropped to 110 in September. In the Linking Words
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,months
sales
slightly increased and reached 190 Use synonyms
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dirhams
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