The line graph below shows the changes in the rate of sales of Gold in Dubai in one year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparison where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the rate of change in the
sales
of gold in Dubai in 2002.
Overall
, it is clearly seen that the sales
show a huge fluctuation every month
.
Looking at the details, in the initial month
the sale of gold is 200 million
dirhams
which rise to 350 million
dirhams
in the month
of May. In April, the sales
significantly decrease to 250 million
dirhams
and keep on decreasing till the month
of July 110 million
dirhams
.
In August the sales
increase to 200 million
dirhams
and then
dropped to 110 in September. In the last
3 months
the Add a comma
,months
sales
slightly increased and reached 190 million
dirhams
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, month, million, dirhams with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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