The charts below show the performance of a bus company in terms of punctuality, both actual and target (what actually happened compared to what the company was trying to achieve), and the number of complaints from passengers.
The bar chart illustrates how well the bus
company
can perform in both the frequency of driving to a depot on time as the Use synonyms
target
giving and how many customers feel pleasant with the bus service on their journey between 1999 and 2003.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the Linking Words
company
hardly reached the Use synonyms
target
through 4 Use synonyms
years
Use synonyms
although
it reduced the percentage of aim for every 2 Linking Words
years
, except 2003. Use synonyms
Moreover
, it Linking Words
also
received disappointment from customers, and the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
complaints
grew in each period.
In the first two Use synonyms
years
, the percentage of objectives suggested high than it could do in reality, at 86%. Use synonyms
Although
in the first Linking Words
year
the buses recorded 85% nearly the aim, a sharply reduce of 3% was seen in the percentage of services arriving on time in 2000. The Use synonyms
company
witnessed the portion of the time that drivers could go exactly at approximately 85% in the following two Use synonyms
years
. Use synonyms
However
, the actual figures were still lower than expected about 1%. By 2003, the Linking Words
company
could meet a better result which is higher than the Use synonyms
target
of about 0,5%.
Turning to the Use synonyms
complaints
Use synonyms
number
, it increased the awful experiments of passengers journeys Use synonyms
in
each Change preposition
apply
year
. There was a dramatic growth of 100 in the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
complaints
in the first two Use synonyms
years
. Even though the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
complaints
reduced to nearly 90 in 2001, it pumped to 100 again in the next Use synonyms
year
. Use synonyms
Although
2003 could get over the Linking Words
target
, an increase of 20 was recorded in the Use synonyms
complaints
Use synonyms
in
Change preposition
apply
this
Linking Words
year
Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words company, target, years, number, complaints, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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