You know that a building company is planning to build new houses in immediate proximity to your house. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter – Say how you found out about their plan – Describe how you feel about it – Explain what you hope that they do about it

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am Raj, a civil engineer, living in Haldiwani, next to your proposed building project. I am writing to express my annoyance regarding your company's latest construction project. After talking with your site engineers, and convincing them as I was from the neighbourhood, I got my hand on your layout plan. I must say it is very well organised and the structure plan is

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appropriate. Many from my society including myself were dishearted when we came to know that trees and plantations are going to be compromised in our area. But

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, housing projects are as necessary as any other thing. I strongly suggest you consider planting more trees in the garden area and even surrounding the houses, that will keep the whole area fresh for morning walks.

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, please increase the parking capacity if possible, have I been through your plans and I find it is being compromised. I gladly welcome you to our colony. Yours sincerely, Raj Kapoor

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