Some people feel that animals should have the same rights as humans, but others think they are not as equal or intelligent as us so should not have the same rights. Discuss both opinions and give your opinion

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have always been one of the most debatable topics to date. Some argue that
animals
shall be treated equally and given the same
rights
as ,
humans
whereas
others have a
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different opinion totally different opinions i.e.,
humans
are superior to
animals
and by no chance could be considered equivalent to
animals
. In
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I will discuss both aspects and will give my opinion on
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considered equal to
humans
. The reason
animals
should be treated in the same manner as that of
humans
is that.
Firstly
,
animals
are loving
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and have friendly nature. When food is given to them on time they never hurt anyone
for instance
, if we look at dogs, the most loyal animal on
this
planet. To protect their owner they are ready to sacrifice their own life yet the majority of people fail to provide them equal
rights
as no regulation is observed, that might take steps for their protection. On the other ,hand some
animals
lack intelligence, no doubt are they living creatures, have feelings yet can be very harmful towards
humans
.
Animals
do have brains
however
there are no senses available which is why differentiating between good and bad proves not possible
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them until fully trained by professionals.
That is
also
not possible because they are in millions and training each one of them seems unrealistic.
This
is why they are not to be given equal
rights
for example
, snakes are very poisonous and lethal. No matter how well are they trained the moment they witness an opportunity, will attack. In conclusion, I will suggest that
animals
deserve to be treated equally because they are not feelingless, and are very hardworking in nature. If given equal
rights
,
this
might help in creating a safe environment and many
animals
will be safe from dying.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Ethical treatment
  • Cognitive functions
  • Hierarchy of rights
  • Ecosystems
  • Legislation
  • Species-specific
  • Sentience
  • Consciousness
  • Compassion
  • Cruelty
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