Some people feel that animals should have the same rights as humans, but others think they are not as equal or intelligent as us so should not have the same rights. Discuss both opinions and give your opinion.
Animals
right have always been one of the most debatable Change noun form
Animals'
Animal's
topic
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topics
till
date. Some argue that Change preposition
to
animals
shall be treated equally and given the same rights
as humans
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,humans
whereas
others have a
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a total different opinion
total different opinions
total
different opinions i.e., Change the word
totally
humans
are superior to animals
and by no chance could be considered equivalent to animals
. In this
essay I will discuss both the
aspects and Correct article usage
apply
alongside
will give my opinion on Change preposition
apply
animals
be considering
equal to Change the form of the verb
considered
humans
.
The reason animals
should be treated in same
manner as that of Change the article
the same
humans
is because
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that
Firstly
animals
are loving creature and has
friendly nature. When food is given to them on time they never hurt anyone Change the verb form
have
for instance
, if we look at dogs, the most loyal animal on this
planet. To protect their owner they are ready to sacrifice their own life yet majority
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the majority
people
fail to provide them equal Change preposition
of people
rights
as no regulation is observed, that might take steps for their protection.
On the other
hand
some Add a comma
,hand
animals
lack intelligence, no doubt are they living creatures, have feelings yet can be very harmful towards humans
. Animals
do have brain
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brains
however
there are no senses available which is why differentiating between good and bad proves not possible to them until unless
fully trained by Correct word choice
apply
professional
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professionals
That is
also
not possible because they are in millions and training each one of them seems unrealistic. This
is why they are not to be given equal rights
for example
, snakes are very poisonous and lethal. No matter how well are they trained the moment they witness an opportunity, will attack.
In conclusion, I will suggest that animals
deserve to be treated equally because they are not feelingless, are
very hardworking Correct word choice
and are
nature
. If given equal Change preposition
in nature
rights
, this
might help in creating safe
environment and many Add an article
a safe
animals
will be safe from dying.Submitted by khannaughty26 on
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