Some people feel that animals should have the same rights as humans, but others think they are not as equal or intelligent as us so should not have the same rights. Discuss both opinions and give your opinion.

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right have always been one of the most debatable

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till

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date. Some argue that

animals

shall be treated equally and given the same

rights

as

humans

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whereas

others have

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a total different opinion

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total

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different opinions i.e.,

humans

are superior to

animals

and by no chance could be considered equivalent to

animals

. In

this

essay I will discuss both

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aspects and

alongside

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will give my opinion on

animals

be

considering

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equal to

humans

. The reason

animals

should be treated in

same

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the same

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manner as that of

humans

is

because

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.

Firstly

animals

are loving creature and

has

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friendly nature. When food is given to them on time they never hurt anyone

for instance

, if we look at dogs, the most loyal animal on

this

planet. To protect their owner they are ready to sacrifice their own life yet

majority

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people

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fail to provide them equal

rights

as no regulation is observed, that might take steps for their protection.

On the other

hand

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some

animals

lack intelligence, no doubt are they living creatures, have feelings yet can be very harmful towards

humans

.

Animals

do have

brain

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however

there are no senses available which is why differentiating between good and bad proves not possible to them until

unless

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fully trained by

professional

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.

That is

also

not possible because they are in millions and training each one of them seems unrealistic.

This

is why they are not to be given equal

rights

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, snakes are very poisonous and lethal. No matter how well are they trained the moment they witness an opportunity, will attack. In conclusion, I will suggest that

animals

deserve to be treated equally because they are not feelingless,

are

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very hardworking

nature

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in nature

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. If given equal

rights

,

this

might help in creating

safe

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a safe

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environment and many

animals

will be safe from dying.