The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.

The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.
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The line graph given illustrates the consumption of three kinds of fast food, including
pizza
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,
fish
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and
chips
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and
hamburgers
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by Australian youngsters throughout the period from 1975 to 2000.
Overall
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, as can be seen,
pizza
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and
hamburgers
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experienced an increase,
while
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fish
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and
chips
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consumption decreased over the given period. In the beginning,
fish
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and
chips
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were the most popular fast food among teenagers with approximately 100
times
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which was eaten by
this
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group in a
year
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,
although
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this
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number fell to just over 39
times
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in a
year
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which reached the least popularity
at the end
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of the period.
In contrast
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,
pizza
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and
hamburgers
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consumption was the least popular fast foods compared to
fish
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and
chips
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which were eaten almost two
times
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per
year
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,
although
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this
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number had witnessed a rise to 100
times
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per
year
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for
hamburgers
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and 82
times
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for
pizza
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,
additionally
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,
hamburgers
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reached the highest popularity compared to others in 2000.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although".
Vocabulary: Replace the words pizza, fish, chips, hamburgers, times, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Consumption
  • Trend
  • Hamburgers
  • Pizza
  • Fried chicken
  • Period
  • Health awareness
  • Availability
  • Taste preferences
  • Marketing influence
  • Implications
  • Western culture
  • Peak periods
  • Promotions
  • Societal habits
  • Patterns
  • Popular
  • Declined
  • Introduction
  • Eating habits
  • Summarise
  • Prediction
  • Recommendations
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