The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.

The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.
The line graph given illustrates the consumption of three kinds of fast food, including
pizza
,
fish
and
chips
and
hamburgers
by Australian youngsters throughout the period from 1975 to 2000.
Overall
, as can be seen,
pizza
and
hamburgers
experienced an increase,
while
fish
and
chips
consumption decreased over the given period. In the beginning,
fish
and
chips
were the most popular fast food among teenagers with approximately 100
times
which was eaten by
this
group in a
year
,
although
this
number fell to just over 39
times
in a
year
which reached the least popularity
at the end
of the period.
In contrast
,
pizza
and
hamburgers
consumption was the least popular fast foods compared to
fish
and
chips
which were eaten almost two
times
per
year
,
although
this
number had witnessed a rise to 100
times
per
year
for
hamburgers
and 82
times
for
pizza
,
additionally
,
hamburgers
reached the highest popularity compared to others in 2000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pizza, fish, chips, hamburgers, times, year with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Consumption
  • Trend
  • Hamburgers
  • Pizza
  • Fried chicken
  • Period
  • Health awareness
  • Availability
  • Taste preferences
  • Marketing influence
  • Implications
  • Western culture
  • Peak periods
  • Promotions
  • Societal habits
  • Patterns
  • Popular
  • Declined
  • Introduction
  • Eating habits
  • Summarise
  • Prediction
  • Recommendations
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