The plans below show how the ground floor of a particular building has changed over time.

The blueprints depict how the ground floor of a specific building has altered
in
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time.
Overall
, it can obviously be said that the kitchen and entrance of the building have not altered since 1958.
However
, sometimes the number of
rooms
of
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the building has a fluctuating trend by it using purpose across the timespan. The main using purpose of the building has changed three times:
office
,
apartment
,
flower
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and flower
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shop
, 1958-1984, 1958-2000, 2001-present, respectively.
Whereas
the
office
version had 7
rooms
, the
flower
shop
has only 4
rooms
. The
apartment
and
office
had a minimum
one
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bathroom
while
the
flower
shop
has not
a
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bathroom. The
Apartment
and
Office
had
a
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similar size of floor
although
the
flower
shop
has a bigger floor than the others. The
apartment
and
office
had slightly different sizes of
rooms
whereas
the
flower
shop
has an equal size of room.
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