Reasearch into new medicines and treatments is essential. Should this research be paid for by private companies or by the government?

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the development of medicine and

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is significantly vital for curing and enhancing health.

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, those projects must have proper

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investment

, leading to the question of who

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responsibility to carry out and fund them is often disputed. In my opinion, I believe that both authority and private

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should have a duty together in

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different

ways. Actually, there are a lot of the major contributions by private

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pharmaceutical

firms to discover and bring new

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treatment

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to market. They have invested millions of dollars in many advanced machines and

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technologies

during their research process.

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groups of experts in relevant fields and

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modern

laboratories in order to get

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successful

projects. Of course, those which bring a high profit to those individual firms

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new products and methods.

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, the

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of

drugs

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or

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expensive to limit some patients who have low incomes approach for a cure.

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, the high

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of special

drugs

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as diabetes or cancer makes poor patients not to be unfordable.

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government

can focus on public health priorities and bring benefits to the community.

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can give supportive strategies for private companies

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as open public funding for drug innovation research, providing innovation awards and

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regulations.

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state can support

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private groups by exempting the tax for new drug innovation for curing serious diseases.

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should control the quality and

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of new medicines.

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will protect the poor can get

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treated. Take

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example, patients should be given free

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for serious diseases

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as the lungs, cancers, diabetes,..v.v.. by government funding. In summary, I hope that both private finance and taxpayers’ money are encouraged to

reasearch

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research

and develop new

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treatment

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all citizens as

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possible

.