he diagrams below give information about the Eiffel Tower in Paris and an outline project to extend it underground. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown.
The two diagrams above show respectively a Paris city map, which highlights the main attractions, and a project about prospective changes in the Eiffel Tower's underground structure.
In particular
, the design entails the construction of an underground structure, composed of five floors, each serving a different purpose.
Starting from the bottom going up, the fifth and deepest level, as well as
the fourth level, will hold parking lots. In the third and second sections, visitors will be able to have access to a variety of recreational commodities, such
as a cinema and a museum, as well as
shops and restaurants. Looking at the information given by the diagram, the second platform will be 115 meters high. At the top of the structure will be set up both the ticket office and access to the Eiffel Tower. The first platform will be 57 meters high. Each section is connected to each other by a lift system.
A glass ceiling connects the first level to the foundations of the tower.Submitted by elisabetta.temporin on
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