As global trade increases between different countries, many daily necessities are produced in other countries. Such goods are usually transported a long distance. Do the benefits of this trend outweigh its drawbacks?

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As global
trade
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rise between several
nations
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,
nemerous
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numerous
daily necessities are produced in other
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. namely products are usually transported a long distance.
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this
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trend
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can bring benefits namely,
allow
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people
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to experience a wide range of
goods
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I believe the demerits of
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trend
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outweigh the merits because
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trend
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can create environmental issues and have a negative impact
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domestic
business
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. On the one hand, the primary advantage for
increase
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global
trade
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between
countrieis
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countries
is
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allowing
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people
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opportunity
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the opportunity
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to
experiecnce
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experience
a wide range of products.
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,
people
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can purchase food or
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from different countries namely, Africa, Europe, and America, which
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people
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will have many
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chooses
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regard their
goods
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.
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Furthermore
,
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increase
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the
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global
trade
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between
countrieis
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countries
will contribute to
make
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the market more competitive.
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, every commercial company will compete to provide high-quality and affordable
goods
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in order to attract more customers.
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, I would like to argue
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the downsides
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of
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increase
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the
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apply
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global
trade
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between
nations
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significantly
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are significantly
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more than
benefits
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the benefits
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. The primary downside of
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increase
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the
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global
trade
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between
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is can create environmental problems. To illustrate, transported products for a long distance can
increase
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the
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air pollution.
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is because the most of
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shipped
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are shipped
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using
flight
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flights
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or ships, which these forms of transport use fossil fuel.
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of local
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business
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businesses
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is another disadvantage of
gorwing
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growing
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trad
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trade
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the fact that the local
business
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will face challenges to compete with global companies.
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, many local
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business
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will close, which
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this
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can have
a
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detrimenal
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detrimental
consequences on
local
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the local
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economy of
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the country
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.
To sum up
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,
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this
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trend
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can bring upsides namely,
allow
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allowing
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individuals to experience a wide range of
goods
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in my opinion the drawbacks of
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trend
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outweigh the disadvantage because
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trend
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can contribute to environmental degradation and have a adverse impact
in
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domestic
business
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.
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