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Why do you think social skills are now being emphasized by companies during the recruitment process? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Introduction
Everyboday
know
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 that
companes
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companies
 use
diffirend
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different
methot
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methods
 when
get
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employee
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an employee
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.
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Theri
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Their
 social
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skills
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areskills
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 able to
shows
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about
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they
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their
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caracteric
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character
 nformatition that's why some employer has quachtion about
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theri
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their
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skills
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. İt is
some times
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sometimes
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tylp
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style
type
help
, some time is bad.
Body · 1
İf we look about the good site employe's social able to show
personalty
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personality
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combinagetation
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combi agitation
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be show
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 us
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theri
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their
there
pscology
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psychology
typs
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types
. Many smart
boss
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bosses
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 or
employe
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employee
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able
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are able
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 to
understend
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understand
 how is caractery
according
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toaccording
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theri
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their
answer
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answers
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 and we can
understoud
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understand
understood
.
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On the other hand
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, social
skills
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quastion
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question
 able to give us wrong
infermation
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information
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for example
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 one
people
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person
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 able to good worker about his
experince
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experience
experiences
 and job
hawover
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haw over
however
hi
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he
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 can't join social life. İt is not meaning
hi
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he
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 can not be
good
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a good
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 worker.
Conclusion
Finely, asking social
skills
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depent
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dependent
 for
everyboday
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everybody
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emloye' s
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caracreric
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cadaveric
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wrong
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informatation
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information
.
İn
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 my opinion first employer
shold
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should
 ask about his
experince
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experience
 if
employer
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the employer
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not
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does not
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enoughf
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enough
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imformation
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information
,
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the empleyer
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empleyer
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employer
able
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 to ask about
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theri
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their
 social
skills
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. We have some
spesific
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specific
quachtion
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question
 about our life, it is our special we don't want
give
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 it like social
skills
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.

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