Why do you think social skills are now being emphasized by companies during the recruitment process? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Everyboday
know
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knows

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companes
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companies

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different

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methot
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methods

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when
get
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getting

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employee
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an employee

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Theri
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Their

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social
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skills
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areskills
wereskills

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able to
shows
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show

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about
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apply

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they
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their

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caracteric
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character

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nformatition that's why some employer has quachtion about
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theri
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their

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social
skills
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. İt is
some times
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sometimes

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good
tylp
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style
type
help

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, some time is bad. İf we look about the good site employe's social able to show
personalty
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personality

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combinagetation
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combi agitation

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or it can
be show
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show

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us
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theri
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their
there

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pscology
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psychology

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typs
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types

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. Many smart
boss
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bosses

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or
employe
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employee

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able
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are able

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to
understend
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understand

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how is caractery
according
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toaccording

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theri
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their

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answer
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answers

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and we can
understoud
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understand
understood

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On the other hand
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, social
skills
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quastion
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question

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able to give us wrong
infermation
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information

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, for example,

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for example
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

one
people
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person

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able to good worker about his
experince
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experience
experiences

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and job
hawover
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haw over
however

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hi
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he

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can't join social life. İt is not meaning
hi
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he

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can not be
good
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a good

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worker. Finely, asking social
skills
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is
depent
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dependent

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for
everyboday
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everybody

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some time show to us and helping how
emloye' s
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emloye's

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caracreric
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cadaveric

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, some time give to us
wrong
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the wrong

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informatation
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information

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.
İn
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,İn

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my opinion first employer
shold
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should

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ask about his
experince
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experience

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if
employer
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the employer

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not
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does not

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enoughf
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enough

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get to
imformation
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information

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,
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the empleyer
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the empleyer

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empleyer
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employer
able
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is able

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to ask about
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theri
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their

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social
skills
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. We have some
spesific
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specific

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quachtion
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question

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about our life, it is our special we don't want
give
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to give

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it like social
skills
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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