The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2011 and 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2011 and 2021.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The supplied bar chart provides data about the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts between 2018 and 2021. It is measured in millions. It is obvious that from 2018 to 2021 quantity of Instagram influencers the celebrities skyrocketed and changed noticeably. At
first,
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in 2018 Cristiano Ronaldo and Ariana Grande had almost the same figure of followers. Compared to others, as it observed The Rock had the fewest influencers,roughly 90000000, in ,contrast Selena Gomez had the most auditory, it is approximately 150000000. At the same time, Kylie Jenner had just under 100 million followers. After three years, the number of subscribers of each celebrity has increased substantially.
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, it can be seen, that Ronaldo has the largest amount of subscribers, their quantity has tripled and amounted to nearly 325 million,
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Selena Gomez had fewer communities. Only her statistic has not even doubled,
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others have soared 2,5 times.
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The Rock, Ariana Grande and Kylie Jenner now have practically the same number of auditory.
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, for 3 years, almost each of them received a significant went up in subscribers and
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became more popular.
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