A year ago, you lent your favourite book to a friend who you thought would enjoy it. Unfortunately, your friend has forgotten to return it. The book has sentimental value to you as it had been presented by your grandmother. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter: ask how he or she is doing remind him / her about the book explain why you need it back
Dear Jansen,
How are you? I hope you are doing well. Do you still
lives
in Medan? If yes, why don't we Change the verb form
live
hangout
together and Correct your spelling
hang out
talking
about what are you doing nowWrong verb form
talk
?.
I writing Change the punctuation
?
this
letter because I would like to let you know about the book
you borrow from me last
year on
May.
After we're back from Change preposition
in
gym
, we're taking rest at my place Add an article
the gym
also
Correct word choice
and also
playing
video games until night. It's a lot of Wrong verb form
play
enjoyness
and noises we made. Correct your spelling
enjoyment
In
the end of playing video games, we read some of my books and you want to borrow one. The Change the preposition
At
book
you borrow is tittled
"The Beautiful Night" which Correct your spelling
titled
written
by Jonathan Add a missing verb
was written
also
covered with Correct word choice
and also
mixtured
Correct your spelling
mixture
mixtures
colour
of blue and black. You say will return the Fix the agreement mistake
colours
book
in 2 weeks, but until now you haven't return
it. I had already informed Wrong verb form
returned
about
the Correct pronoun usage
you about
book
you borrowed, but you always said that you forgot.
The book
I lent is so memmorable
and precious because it was presented by my grandmother Correct your spelling
memorable
since
I am 10-year-old. I would like you to return it because the Correct word choice
when
book
you borrowed already pass 1 year.
Regards,
WilliamSubmitted by wilztan6700 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite