The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given graph informs about the
age
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of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020. The
data
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is given about
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age
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ages
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from
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0 to 65 and above.
Firstly
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, in the
year
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1990, in
age
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between 25-54 was less compared to other years with 50%.
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Age
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between 0-14 there was more than 10% ,
15
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for 15
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-24 it was more than 20%,
55
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for 55
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-64 it was 11% and
65
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for 65
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and above it was 27%.
Secondly
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, in 2000, in
age
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between 15-24 was
near by
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nearby
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20%.
Thirdly
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,
2010
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in 2010
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, in
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age
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ages
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0-14 there was more than 20%. In the
year
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2020,
in
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age
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65 and above was less than 20%. In conclusion,
from
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the above
data
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shows that
in
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apply
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every
year
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more number people
was
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were
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in
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age
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the age
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group 25-54 and less in 65 and above. The lowest was in
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year
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the year
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2020 in
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age
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the age
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group 15-24. The above
data
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describe
about
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apply
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the Iceland population. The information from 1990 to 2020 is
discribe
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described
describe
in
above
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the above
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data
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.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words age, data, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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