at the presen time, the population of some countries include a relatively larg number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In some countries, the population of

young

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generation surpass the senior citizens. There is an ongoing debate on the positive and negative sides of

this

topic. From my perspective, the advantages exceed the disadvantages.

To begin

with, the main benefits of young adults are better productivity and more workforce. The younger minds contain new attitudes and modern opinion

system

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. If a young individual sets foot in a place, he will come up with new solutions for issues. That's the reason why the younger ones make

profit

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.

For instance

, it would be worthwhile if a company hire a young graduate

instead

of someone who will be

retired

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soon.

Furthermore

, as we get older our body's capability to work properly will decline.

Therefore

, the young people's abilities are far better and they would become appropriate professionals.

On the other hand

, the drawbacks cannot be ignored. First of all,

according to

technology

advancement

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younger people tend to be passive. Everyone

agree

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that disaster is waiting for us without taking life seriously by young adults.

For example

, researchers have shown that people in

this

age group have been involved in

digital

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world and

unable

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to concentrate on essential issues. Second of all,

overpopulation

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the overpopulation

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of younger one lead to more educational demands. There must be adequate facilities, colleges and academic opportunities for increasing numbers of

younger

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the younger

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generation. If society

don't

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take notice, we will face teenagers with no useful skills and ambitions. No one would be more hazardous than a 20

years

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old aimless person. In conclusion, it seems to me that there are some drawbacks.

While

,

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the pros outweigh the cons. The government is obligated to put more

efforts

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into issues concerning younger ones. With

this

approach, our delightful future will become achievable.