Some people say that the most important thing for being rich is people have opportunity for helping other person ? Do you agree or disagree?

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dynamic world,

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have been categorized as being wealthy and less fortunate.

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a fraction of humanity believes that

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achieving superficial wealth is a medium to be helpful to

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not always the case.

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, I firmly stand to disagree with

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notion for the following reasons. For one, being wealthy entails a person

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selfish at times. A good example of

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is somebody who is climbing the ladder of success

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stepping on colleagues or the

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around them.

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thought may be sad, but

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is very true in

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generation. To

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elaborate, as a human, we are slaves of our emotions and aspiring to be rich devours our morals that we only want superficial things rather than make

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happy or be of help to

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.

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, being at the top of the food chain entails greater responsibilities.

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are blinded by the big goals they have

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they are inconsiderate of other

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.

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, a CEO of a big company

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not care about the well-being of his employees as long as they get the job done and they present a good outcome.

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does not contribute

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or promote a good environment in the workplace.

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, becoming rich is becoming poor in some aspect of your life. An example of

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aspect is the relationships you have weaved throughout your existence. It is

hardwork

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to maintain your wealth and you would have to spend most of your time working

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leaves your family and friends alone and not

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able to spend as much time with you anymore resulting

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your relationships being distant and unfamiliar.

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, minimal

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in relationships results

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quarrels and problems in the long run. In a nutshell, being wealthy does not give an individual more opportunities to be of help to

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but the opposite. It is because money is the root of all evil and nothing good comes out of having too much money.