You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter • explain your situation • describe your problems • tell him/her when you think you can start.

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Dear Carter, My name is Nathan. I am writing to concern about the position of assistant manager that I am

due

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to begin

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next Monday.

However

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, a problem has arisen. As you know, currently I am working with my uncle in the food business.

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, you remembered from an interview I gained valuable experience in

this

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field. Unfortunately,

due to

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a major health ,problem he was admitted to hospital and went through surgery and leaving my aunt in charge of both home and work. She requested me to stay 2 weeks more because of the peak time of business. I realise that

this

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will be inconvenient for you, but very much hope that you understand my circumstances and give me another chance to take my position after 2 weeks as planned. I am very thankful to you for

this

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opportunity. I promised you, I will never let you down and full fill my responsibilities with full passion. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

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Sincerely, Nathan

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

168 words

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Universities should accept equal members of male and female in every subject.Do you agree or disagree ?

Some people think that in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should make efforts in reducing environmental pollutions and housing problems. To what extent do you agree to disagree with this statement?