chart below shows numbers of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates how many grown-ups took part in main sports in one area between 1997 and 2017.
Overall
, Gentle walking was the most popular among major sports in both 1997 and 2017, while
playing basketball and cricket were the most unpopular in 1997 and 2017, respectively.
Looking at data more closely, one can see that Gentle walking were
the most played, which stood at 50,000 Change the verb form
was
people
in 1997 and 55,000 people
in 2017. There were no significant changes in Jogging and Gym(aerobic) which remained stably
at roughly 33,000 and 35,000 Change the word
stable
people
, respectively.
On the other hand
, compared to the numbers in 1997, the participants
Replace the word
participation
of
playing football, hiking and basketball considerably increased in 2017. Football and Hiking showed Change preposition
in
the
similar patterns Correct article usage
apply
risising
from around 33,000 in 1997 to 48,000 in 2017. Correct your spelling
rising
Furthermore
, in the case of Basketball, the figures of participants alomost
doubled from 9,000 in 1997 to 22,000, meanwhile, the number of Correct your spelling
almost
people
playing cricket plummeted from 27,000 in 1997 to 8,000 in 2017.Submitted by dike1221 on
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