multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this ?

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In the past multinational
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are
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popular in developed
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, but nowadays they are growing dramatically in developing
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.
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brings advantages to those
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as growth in the economic sector but
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benefits aspect the drawbacks
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develop.
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essay will explore the pros and cons of the impact on growing multinational
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in developing
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. Let's talk about the advantages aspect of growing in multinational
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. One of the most beneficial aspects is growing in the economic sector. Take electric vehicles as an example. Ten years ago
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type of vehicle was just a product in developing
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as America and France but after 2000 car and motorcycle electric increased dramatically in developing
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as Indonesia and some nations in Southeast Asia.
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the growth of multinational electricity vehicle
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developing their wings in developing nations.
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condition economic development
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not only contributing to the country's income but
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to a society which has low-level income.
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, multinational
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generate a drawback impact on developing small
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in developing
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. They can not grow to become big
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of because the expansion of big
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from developed
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.
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one of the motorcycles
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produced by one of the vehicle firms in Indonesia can broaden its wings
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losing in competition with motorcycle
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from Japan
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as Honda and Yamaha.
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, many industries grow in big cities. Pollution is becoming a problem as an impact on
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of industry. In conclusion, all considered, starting from growth in economic and societal incomes as a benefit of multinational
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and
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the inability
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of small
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to develop and enhance pollution in big cities as a drawbacks effect. I personally believe that the benefits outweigh the negatives.
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task response
Provide a more balanced discussion of the advantages and disadvantages of multinational companies in developing countries. Consider elaborating on the disadvantages with more specific examples and analysis.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that the essay follows a clearer logical structure and that the main points are supported with more developed explanations and examples. Use transition words to strengthen coherence and cohesion.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Globalization
  • Multinational corporations (MNCs)
  • Foreign direct investment (FDI)
  • Developing economies
  • Infrastructure development
  • Capacity building
  • Cultural diversity
  • Sustainability
  • Corporate social responsibility (CSR)
  • Technological transfer
  • Economic disparity
  • Market saturation
  • Brain drain
  • Indigenous industries
  • Expatriate management
  • Trade imbalance
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