multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this ?

In the past multinational
companies
are
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were
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popular in developed
countries
, but nowadays they are growing dramatically in developing
countries
.
This
brings advantages to those
countries
such
as growth in the economic sector but
following
this
benefits aspect the drawbacks
also
develop.
This
essay will explore the pros and cons of the impact on growing multinational
companies
in developing
countries
. Let's talk about the advantages aspect of growing in multinational
companies
. One of the most beneficial aspects is growing in the economic sector. Take electric vehicles as an example. Ten years ago
this
type of vehicle was just a product in developing
countries
such
as America and France but after 2000 car and motorcycle electric increased dramatically in developing
countries
such
as Indonesia and some nations in Southeast Asia.
this
happens
due to
the growth of multinational electricity vehicle
companies
developing their wings in developing nations.
As a result
of
this
condition economic development
increase
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increases
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not only contributing to the country's income but
also
to a society which has low-level income.
On the other hand
, multinational
companies
also
generate a drawback impact on developing small
companies
in developing
countries
. They can not grow to become big
companies
of because the expansion of big
companies
from developed
countries
.
For example
viar
Correct word choice
apply
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one of the motorcycles
that is
produced by one of the vehicle firms in Indonesia can broaden its wings
due to
losing in competition with motorcycle
companies
from Japan
such
as Honda and Yamaha.
In addition
, many industries grow in big cities. Pollution is becoming a problem as an impact on
growing
Verb problem
the growth
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of industry. In conclusion, all considered, starting from growth in economic and societal incomes as a benefit of multinational
companies
and
incapable
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the inability
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of small
companies
to develop and enhance pollution in big cities as a drawbacks effect. I personally believe that the benefits outweigh the negatives.
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Provide a more balanced discussion of the advantages and disadvantages of multinational companies in developing countries. Consider elaborating on the disadvantages with more specific examples and analysis.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Globalization
  • Multinational corporations (MNCs)
  • Foreign direct investment (FDI)
  • Developing economies
  • Infrastructure development
  • Capacity building
  • Cultural diversity
  • Sustainability
  • Corporate social responsibility (CSR)
  • Technological transfer
  • Economic disparity
  • Market saturation
  • Brain drain
  • Indigenous industries
  • Expatriate management
  • Trade imbalance
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