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The chart and table below give information about tourist at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart and table below give information about tourist at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart and table illustrate the survey on tourists who spend their holiday at a certain resort in Australia.
Overall
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, the chart shows the number of visitors who come from different regions and the table gives some features about people. In the pie chart, the number of
travelers
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travellers
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 from Europe was the highest, with 37%, followed by the US at 35%.
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 the total of these countries accounted
over
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 half, the opposite was seen in the
asia
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Asia
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 other just 10% and 18% respectively. on the table, Asian tourists had a medium length of stay is 7 days, with the most accommodation is
5-star
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a 5-star
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 hotel and
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acivity
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activity
 is sightseeing,
similarly
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 with American Tourist.
however
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, the average length of holiday
of
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 The US is 14 days,
doubled
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that than
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than
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Asian
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Asia
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. 16 days
is
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are
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the commoly
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commoly
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commonly
 length of vacation
in
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Europen
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European
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tourist
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tourists
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, 6 more than visitors from other regions, but
european
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European
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 and other region
are
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apply
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share the same most
prevanlent
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prevalent
acommodation
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accommodation
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