The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
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The line graph gives information about the usage of various meat and
also
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fish from 1979 and 2004 in a European state.
Overall
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, it is evident from the graph that the consumption of beef and lamb decreased dramatically.
While
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, people started eating chicken more frequently and as for fish, the
grams
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were the same over the given period. Looking at the first line graph in detail, it is noticed that people ate 50
grams
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of fish in 1979 and
this
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amount had a slight decline and after that remained steady throughout a given period. The time interval between 1976 and 2004 showed that the figures became the reverse trend for chicken and lamb. The percentage of chicken's gram was rocked from 150
grams
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to 250
grams
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,
in contrast
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, the quantity of Lamb usage witnessed a sharp drop down and
initially
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, it was 150
grams
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and
at the end
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, it was around about 52
grams
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. As for beef, at first glance, it is observed that its data of usage fluctuated and
then
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, fell from 1984 to onwards. At
first,
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this
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portion was more than 200
grams
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then
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it dropped down to approximately 170
grams
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and later climbed up to below 250
grams
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and
finally
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, it plummeted from around about 150
grams
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to close to 100
grams
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words grams with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • fish
  • meat
  • poultry
  • beef
  • lamb
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • gradual
  • significant
  • fluctuate
  • peak
  • trough
  • steady
  • correlation
  • period
  • data
  • comparison
  • predominant
  • kilograms per capita
  • dietary habits
  • health consciousness
  • sustainability
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