You have arranged a weekend holiday with a group of friends, but due to your studies you will now be unable to go with them. Write to your friends, and •Tell them why you are unable to go •Say sorry for this •Suggest an alternative activity at another time Begin your letter ‘Dear --------’ Do not write any addresses Write at least 150 words

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Dear Sam and Anna, I am sorry to say that I have some bad news, which is that I won't be able to go with you on the camping trip as we agreed. The reason is that I am trying to prepare myself for an important exam which is related to my final grade and it has a significant role in the average score of my master's degree certification. From

this

point of view, I have a hectic schedule these days.

Moreover

, because of the several resources of the exam, I should more and more read to stick in my mind that data.

In addition

, I am really sorry about that. In fact, I was embarrassed when I realized that I could not participate in your weekend party.

Furthermore

, please accept my apologies for

this

confusion and my mistake. On the other side, To solve

this

misconduct I have an idea for the next month on 20th September. Actually, my uncle has a very specific garden next to the city of Shiraz.

In addition

that garden has many types of amenities and possibilities. We can go to that place and enjoy every second of the time. I believed that sounds like a good alternative for you. Sorry for the trouble once again, and I look forward to receiving the idea for next month. All the best, Kambiz

Submitted by kambiz.pirzad on Mon Jul 24 2023

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

227 words

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