In recent years through high
school
graduates have become
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popular trend to take a
gap
year
for
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instead
of continuing proficient education levels directly after
school
.At the same
time
, a huge number of people believe that it is just
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and expensive waste of
time
.
There are several reasons why humans support
this
idea. First of all ,
journeyCorrect article usage
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to different parts of the world provide
personCorrect article usage
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possibility to obtain new skills ,
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, especially about real everyday life .
Also
,
while
travelling
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may get acquainted with various cultures ,
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and
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realize the essence of people .
Secondly
, learning
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years is
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occupation , for
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should be rewarded and receive quality rest and so a
gap
year
is a great option for
this
. A
year
of travelling will help graduates gain strength, prevent burnout and go to university or start working full of energy and enthusiasm.
Moreover
, almost
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half of young individuals are not sure about their future job or work , and
therefore
,
while
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journey after
they could choose their
occupation .
For example
,
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read an article , where was written about a girl , who took a
year
after graduation . She spent her
time
not just travelling , but volunteering around the world .
Thus
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a
year
she made a great number of new acquaintances and
finally
decided on her profession , which indicates that a
gap
year
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.
On the contrary
,
this
kind of experience has its own drawbacks.
Firstly
, travelling for a
such
long period requires significant investment .
This
means that parents will
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pay a huge part of outlays because most students, even if they work , cannot cover all costs from
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income. So it may become
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financial burn for the person’s family.
Secondly
, on the one side a
gap
year
is a pleasant opportunity for relaxation ,
however
,
on the other
during
this
period baccalaureate holders can lose any vestige of motivation and become accustomed to an idle life.
To conclude
, after a long
time
of being drowned in
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and exams , high
school
graduates should be given a chance to make
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independent decision about taking a
gap
year
. From my perspective, despite all the advantages discussed, I tend to believe that it is more beneficial not to take a
gap
year
to preserve money, precious
time
and motivation.