The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line chart provides information about how many overseas tourists went to the
coast
, the mountains and the
lakes
in
an
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European country from 1987 to 2007. Units are measured in thousands.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the most popular destination was the
coast
at the beginning and
at the end
of the period. The figures for the mountains and the
lakes
followed
and
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upper trend over the period, particularly the former one. Looking
at
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more detail at the number of overseas visitors to the
coast
, it started at 40,000 in 1987, which was followed by a
slightly
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decrease to roughly 35,000 in 1992.
Then
, the figure went up substantially to approximately 75,000 in 2007. The figure for overseas tourists that preferred visiting the
lakes
started at 10,000 in 1987 and
then
it significantly grew up to 40,000 in 1997. By 2002, the value overpassed that of the
coast
visitors, peaking at almost 75,000.
Then
, it dropped substantially to 50,000 in 2007. The number of
lakes
visitor was half the figure of
coast
visitors at the beginning of the period, and
then
slighlty
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slightly
increased to almost 35,000 in 2007.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coast, lakes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "substantially" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuate
  • Significant
  • Trends
  • Comparative analysis
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Steady
  • Surge
  • Plummet
  • Consistency
  • Highlight
  • Reinforce
  • Data representation
  • Time frame
  • Subject matter
  • Overseas visitors
  • Tourism promotion
  • Transportation
  • Accommodation facilities
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