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every school system in the world includes regular tests and exams and many people think that it is important for students to take a lot of exams.what is your opinion?

#school #system #world #tests #exams #people #students
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Nowadays
exams
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 and
tests
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 are a paramount issue for
chidren
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children
that is
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 getting worse and worse.A significant
amout
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amount
 of parents argue that
exams
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 and
tests
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 are important to our
school
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 life
while
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 youngsters claim that
exams
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 and
tests
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 are
stressfull
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stressful
 so they reckon that they do not need these
unnecessaary
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unnecessary
tests
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.
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i
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 strongly believe that
exams
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 should not measure our success.
For
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instance
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,instance
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 when we get a low grade, that does not mean that we are
unsuccesfull
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unsuccessful
 in
school
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. To kick things off,we all have hard
lifes
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lives
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 so we always try to overcome these problems but when the
school
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 added these problems
its
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it's
it is
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 getting worse and worse.In
school
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 life we have
all
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apply
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,
a lots
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a lot
lots
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 of
resbonsblity
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responsibility
such
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 as;
homeworks
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homework
,
exams
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,have good relationships
whith
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with
 teachers or our friends.I would argue that especially
exams
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 are
paramaount
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paramount
importanace
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important
 in
the
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school
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 on the grounds that getting high in
exams
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 will affect our future
besides
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 it will affect our
univercity
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university
exam
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exams
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.
Although
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,
exams
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 are
stressfull
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stressful
 especially if you take an important exam or if you did not study for it.Most families what their child to be
succesfull
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successful
 in
school
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,but
this
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succes
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success
 is impossible if the child is not interested in the lessons. In conclusion,
exams
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 are the biggest problem for young people if you do not study
that’s
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that
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 mean you
cant
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can't
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 succeed in
you
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your
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school
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.
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