The charts below show ưhat UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008
The bar charts above analyze the choices of English students in 2008 who graduated or postgraduated, other than entering in a full-time working position.
In particular
, the survey focuses on four possible outcomes: part-time work, voluntary work, further
study and unemployment.
As the data provide, voluntary work is the less attractive choice for both graduates
and postgraduates
, with only 345 of the formers choosing volunteering, as well as
only 35000 of the latters. Whereas
, the first pick for both groups is to further
develop their studies: looking at the numbers, 2725 graduates
decide to enroll in other study programs, as 29665 postgraduates
do.
The second best-choice is a part-time job, even though it attracts more graduates
than postgraduates
in comparison. As a matter of fact, the amount of postgraduates
selecting a part-time job is just slightly above the amount of unemployed ones, with a difference of just 1000 people. The same scenario presents itself for graduates
as well, with just a 1000 difference between part-times and unemployed people.Submitted by elisabetta.temporin on
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