The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three Metals during 2014.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three Metals during 2014.
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The given graph highlights information about the altering prices of three metals
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;Copper, Nickel and Zink in 2014.
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, it can be seen that Nickel was the only item which experienced a dramatic fluctuation during the whole period
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the two other figures
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saw fluctuations, with differences that occurred slightly. Looking at the details, Copper's percentage started at 6% which was the highest amount in January in comparison with others and
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decreased to 1% in March and again it hit a tough at negative three in June and in July remained stable at negative
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, remained stable in the
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month at 1%. If we look at Zinc, its amount commenced at 3% in February and
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there was a steady worsen until June with a negative
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it grew to over negative
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. After levelling off until September, in October again declined to a negative
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. Regarding Copper, its portion embarked on 2 % in the first month and went down to around Zero and from May to June remained stable but again rose to 1% from July to September and
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, after fluctuation reached under 2% in December.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words one with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • average monthly change
  • prices of metals
  • trend
  • spike
  • fluctuation
  • increase
  • decrease
  • sharp rise
  • sharp fall
  • stability
  • volatility
  • data points
  • comparison
  • contrast
  • external factors
  • influences
  • market dynamics
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