A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: -request advise about a gift for his/her family -ask about activities and clothing in his/her country -find out about the food

Dear Jun, How are you? I hope you're doing fine. It's been a year since the
last
time we met,
i
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am excited to let you know that
i
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will visit your country next week.
However
, I would need some information before starting my trip. I would like to ask for your advice about what kind of particular gifts do your parents prefer
?
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In my country, we have
world-famous
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pastry shop that serves the best croissants,but I'm not sure whether your parents will like it or not.
In addition
, I'll
also
bring the book that you ask me. As you were aware, I'm
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person and
prefer
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get close to
the
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nature. As for the activities,
are
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there any
place
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that we can go camping and enjoy breathtaking scenery with mountain
view
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?.
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Additionally
, during my visit, what kind of outfit do
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have to wear? because I want to make a pleasant impression when meeting your family. Considering
about
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the food,
actually
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I'm vegetarian and hope you can recommend
me
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the best vegan restaurant that offers
variety
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a variety
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of food. I am looking forward to your reply. Warm regards,
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