A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: -request advise about a gift for his/her family -ask about activities and clothing in his/her country -find out about the food

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Dear Jun, How are you? I hope you're doing fine. It's been a year since the

last

time we met,

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am excited to let you know that

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will visit your country next week.

However

, I would need some information before starting my trip. I would like to ask for your advice about what kind of particular gifts do your parents prefer

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In my country, we have

world-famous

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pastry shop that serves the best croissants,but I'm not sure whether your parents will like it or not.

In addition

, I'll

also

bring the book that you ask me. As you were aware, I'm

adventurous

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person and

prefer

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get close to

the

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nature. As for the activities,

are

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there any

place

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that we can go camping and enjoy breathtaking scenery with mountain

view

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views

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Additionally

, during my visit, what kind of outfit do

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have to wear? because I want to make a pleasant impression when meeting your family. Considering

about

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the food,

actually

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I'm vegetarian and hope you can recommend

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to me

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the best vegan restaurant that offers

variety

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a variety

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of food. I am looking forward to your reply. Warm regards,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

188 words

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