The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph given shows the data of the proportion of people that live in cities, in four countries which are mainly located
at
South East Asia, from the period of 1970 to 2020, and makes a prediction until 2040.
From the overview, percentages of Change preposition
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city's
inhabitants in these four countries were in Change noun form
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a
growth. In 1970, all of them were around or under 30%, but fifty years after that, Remove the article
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the numbers
numbers
of it all increased to more than 30%. The soaring was predicted to keep continue until 2040.
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To begin
with, we can see a
similar growth in Malaysia and Indonesia. Remove the article
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At
the first year, Change preposition
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percentage
of citizens in Malaysia was 30%, and that in Indonesia was roughly 15%. In 2040, Correct article usage
the percentage
proportion
of both these countries would raised about 50% respectively, with 80% in Malaysia and around 60% in Indonesia.
There was a stable increase in the percentage of Thailand, and it was excepted to Add an article
the proportion
went
up continuously after 2020. As for Wrong verb form
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Philippines
, there was a fluctuation before 2010. The percentage hit Correct article usage
the Philippines
the
peak in 1990Correct article usage
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,
but suddenly suffered from a decrease from that year.Remove the comma
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