Some people believe that children should be made disciplined by making them obey rules and do what their parents and teachers want them to do. Others, however, believe that those children who are controlled are not well-prepared to tackle the challenges life brings to them. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Children are the future of the nation and future

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and

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made by their

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and teachers in order to keep them disciplined;

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,

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consider

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idea irrelevant as

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sort of behaviour does not keep them ready to tackle challenges. Both conceptions,

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in the forthcoming paragraphs. There are various positive virtues that

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teenagers are enriched with when they obey their

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and mentors and one of those traits is

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ability to behave with

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in

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and personal environment.

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are filled with distinct soft skills that not only make them

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of attraction

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stimulate them to get promoted in different fields. To cite an example, if a student at school obeys the norms imposed by the principal when he studies in high school, and

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and

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, he becomes a rising star in the eyes of teachers when he plays a game like football at the school level at first and later at state, national-level, and international level enriching with leadership, teamwork, and more.

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, obeying elders' orders

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citizens. The

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who impose strict

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and keep them under severe surveillance, the minors become introverts who cannot express their feelings

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when they find difficulty in their life;

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sort of behaviour provoke them to have phobia

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as stage fear. Apart from that other soft skills are not

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within them

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kind of nature.

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, if the

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impose strict norms

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as do not go outside and do not play games with

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, these

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make the children introverts who cannot mingle with

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, cannot speak

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, lack teamwork and leadership skills, and more.

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adolescents ruin their life becoming prone to depression. In

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it is essential to impose

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and

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on

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minors, the adverse consequences of their severe impositions cannot be neglected.

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, both

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and guides should step forward to grasp the nettle of strict

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at homes and educational institutes.