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in some countries, people prefer to rent a house to live in, while in other countries people prefer to buy their own house. does renting a housr have more advantages or disadvantages than buying a house?

#countries #people #rent #house #housr
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Nowadays, It is often considered that number of people like to
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 to live in,
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 some people prefer to buy their own
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. Actually, there are various advantages and disadvantages to
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 statement. First of all, in some countries, renting a
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 has many advantages to buying a
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. The main advantage is their job. The job is changing every time from one place to another. Thu, they prefer to
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 a
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 near their workplace. What's more, the cost of
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 is less than buying your own
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.
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, they prefer to
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 a
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 and if they did not feel comfortable in it , they can change it at any time.
On the other hand
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, there are many disadvantages to renting a
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 than buying it.
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, you can not change it if you want.
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, you will not feel comfortable when you have your own
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, if you have your own
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that is
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 mean you to have do what you want in it and do it at any time.
To sum up
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, there is no doubt that renting a
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 has several advantages and disadvantages. Thu, You must choose what is suitable for you.
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