The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
first
graph illustrates the percentage of individuals who had three different types of equipment that consumed electricity as their power resources to do their household chores, while
the second given chart indicates the amount of time
that has been put into accomplishing people’s housework during a week from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
, at first
glance
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,glance
it is clear that
throughout this
time
frame the figures who owned these three forms of kitchen tools namely washing machines, refrigerators and vacuum cleaners rocketed up whereas
during this
period of time
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,time
number
of hours that households spent on doing their housework considerably decreased and this
downward trend reflects this
fact that as the amount of buying household goods increases, the number
of hours that people spend at home to do their household chores decreases.
According to
the first
chart, over the first
80 years
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,years
number
of people who bought vacuum cleaners rose significantly from 30% in 1920 to 100% in 2000 and then
this
percentage stands at 100% in the next 20 years
. Also
, it can be seen that owning a refrigerator experienced a similar trend as the vacuum cleaner while
about this
appliance the percentage of families who had it in the first
year of this
time
frame was about 0% and this
upward trend could reach the peak in 1980 then
it remained steady. In addition
, apart from a fluctuation, the whole number
of washing machines which had been purchased increased slightly from 40% in 1920 to about 75% in 2019 over the 100-year period of time
.
Concerning the amount of time
that has been put in
the fulfilment of houses’ work should be noticed that it has decreased over a Change preposition
into
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period
years
from 1920 and over the next 20 years
it remained relatively unchanged.Submitted by m.v.g1371 on
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