The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
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the second given chart indicates the amount of Linking Words
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that has been put into accomplishing people’s housework during a week from 1920 to 2019.
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of hours that households spent on doing their housework considerably decreased and Use synonyms
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downward trend reflects Linking Words
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fact that as the amount of buying household goods increases, the Linking Words
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of hours that people spend at home to do their household chores decreases.
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of people who bought vacuum cleaners rose significantly from 30% in 1920 to 100% in 2000 and Use synonyms
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percentage stands at 100% in the next 20 Linking Words
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appliance the percentage of families who had it in the Linking Words
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it remained relatively unchanged.Use synonyms
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