Task 1: The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The maps illustrate information on the changes
happened
to an industrial Correct pronoun usage
that happened
area
of a town
called Norbiton after future development. Overall
, new buildings and roads
are constructed over the period and leaving the river and the town
area
untouched.
Firstly
, new buildings are created such
as Playground
Correct article usage
a Playground
area
, school, shops and medical centre on
the industrial Change preposition
in
area
. Furthermore
, a factory is also
been established in the north
Replace the word
northern
area
. Apart from that an additional small roundabout is also
been placed at
the southern part of the Change preposition
in
town
near the medical centre probably to avoid traffic congestion. To reach the other side of the river which is the farmland, a bridge has been built for the convenience to
the members of the Change preposition
of
town
.
Moreover
, to reach certain areas new roads
are constructed whereas
before there Correct word choice
apply
was
only two Change the verb form
were
roads
which connected the roundabout, but now three roads
connect the bigger roundabout which connects the smaller roundabout and which is connected to the highway which leads to town
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, town, roads with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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