The graph below shows the amount of goods transported in the UK from 1974 to 2002. Goods transported in UK (1974-2002)

The graph below shows the amount of goods transported in the UK from 1974 to 2002.

Goods transported in UK (1974-2002)
The graph below represents information about how many products were transported by different types of transport in the UK from 1974 to 2002. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it could be seen that the biggest amount of goods
were
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transported using roads from 1974 to 2002. At the begging of the times shown in the graph, the
proportion
of the ways which were used for transporting increased apart of rail.
However
, in 1978 the
proportion
of
road
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roads
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started to decrease ,
while
all
other
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others
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continued to grow.
In the
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1982
road
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roads
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began
rise
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and riched 80
million
tones
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in 1994. In the same period , in 1982 water went up rich approximately 60
million
times and stayed stable by 1994.
Proportion
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of rail from 1982 to 1994 fluctuated from 25
million
to 35
million
. What about
numbers
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pipeline is that they
also
stayed stable from 1982 to 1994.
At the end
of
period
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the period
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in the graph,
proportion
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the proportion
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of all ways which were used for transporting goods climb and in
the
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2002 all these four ways riched the highest point. Road nearly 100
million
, Water over 60
million
, Rail around 40
million
, Pipeline more than 20
million
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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  • amount
  • transported
  • UK
  • increased
  • significantly
  • 28-year period
  • first decade
  • steady increase
  • significant jump
  • highest point
  • gradual decline
  • minor increase
  • dropped
  • similar level
  • goods
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