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The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the United Kingdom between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the United Kingdom between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
The provided line graph compares four different means of transport regarding the commodities transported by them in the United Kingdom over a 28-year period.  As can be clearly seen from the line graph, the most noticeable feature is that road remained the most intensively used mode of transport throughout the
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, at the beginning of the examined period, in 1974, approximately 70
million
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tonnes
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 of
goods
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 were delivered to the United Kingdom via road.
This
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 figure increased with some fluctuations over the next 28
years
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 until it reached just less than 100
million
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tonnes
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 in 2002. It is worth noting that the second most popular modes of transfer were water and rail whose quantities of transported
goods
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 were represented equally at 40
million
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tonnes
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 in 1974. Over the
years
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, the quantity delivered via the former mode experienced a constantly upward trend,
whereas
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 that transported via the latter mode dropped with slight variations, standing at around 65 and 40
million
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tonnes
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 respectively.
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, it should be mentioned that, despite transporting the lowest quantity of
goods
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, pipelines delivered products that amounted to 5
million
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tonnes
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 in 1974 and their number stabilized at just over 20
million
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tonnes
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 from 1995 to 2002. 
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, as the line graph demonstrates, the total figure of shipped
goods
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 to the United Kingdom rose throughout the
years
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, with the road being the most popular.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, million, tonnes, goods with synonyms.
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