The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Describe the information shown below in your own words.
Presented table illustrates economic, demographic and social indicators. Information is presented regarding 4 counrries with different levels of social-econimic development:
Canada
, Japan
, Peru
and Zaire
.
The first indicators inderectly reflects economic situation and demonstrates amount of annual income per capita. As it can be seen Peru
and Zaire
takes the lowest positions there and shows income less than 200$, 160$ and 130$ respectively. On the contarary, Japan
and Canada
, logically, are "pure leaders": income per year is 11100$ - in Canada
, and 15600$ - in Japan
. What makes Japan
one of the wealthiest country in the presented table.
The next indicator, life expectancy at birth, can be proof of previous conclusion about a level of life in these countries: people can live much longer in in Japan
(78 y.), then
in Canada
it is also
high (76 y.), and 51 y. and 47 y. in Peru
and Zaire
.
As for diets and amount of intaken calories, it's clear that Canada
and Japan
haven't any problem with its supply, thorght it can be suggested that Canada
can have some issues with obesity (3326 kcal.). But the last
2 countries, it seems, has opposite picture: Peru
and Zaire
can have some problems in term of calories deficit.
And the last
one is adult literacy rate (%). This
indicator almost raeches its maximum, 99% in both Canada
and Japan
. But it has catastrophically small values in Peru
and Zaire
, 68% and 34% respectively.Submitted by nurdiananur.210201 on
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