The charts below show ưhat UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008
The bar graphs clearly illustrate the types of
work
people
did after graduating from postgraduate and graduate
programmes in the UK in 2008.
Overall
, further
studying was the most popular one among people
who graduated and post-graduated, whereas
, they did not prefer to work
in charity work
which had the lowest amount in the given data.
To begin
with, the number
of postgraduate students in further
study was higher than the graduate
learner with 2.755 and 29.665 respectively, however
, these amounts were the highest ones in both postgraduate and graduate
programmes among all categories. the number
of workers who had a graduate
licence in part-time work
had approximately 7 times more than people
who were postgraduate at 17,735 and 2.535 respectively.
the figure for voluntary work
of the post-graduated students was eighth one of people
were volunteers after graduating. The number
of unemployed was the third highest amount in both types of education levels and the number
of unemployed citizens after a graduate
degree was 10 times more than after a postgraduate degree.Submitted by gficnm
on
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