The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps illustrate a territory of an
island
in its current form and how it looked before building necessary tourist locations.
Overall
, after the construction, the number of architecture has significantly increased including
places for accommodation, swimming, a restaurant, reception and different footpaths and tracks for vehicles.
Before building new facilities, an island
comprised only palm-growing areas and a beach, located in the west part of it.
After the construction of tourist facilities, the island
currently consists of two groups of accommodation in the western and centre parts. To the south, there is a pier and special area for sailing while
the swimming area was added in the west of an
Correct article usage
the
island
. In the centre, a reception was built and around it
there is a vehicle track which leads to the restaurant that Add a comma
,it
located
in the north direction. At the same time, there are a lot of footpaths all around the Add a missing verb
is located
island
that leads to the main facilities.Submitted by katya.8932.45 on
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