The diagrams below show the present building of a college and the plan for changes to the college site in the future

The diagrams below show the present building of a college and the plan for changes to the college site in the future
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The maps illustrate how
school
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territory will be changed in 2020.
Overall
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, the number of classrooms and car park areas will be increased
whereas
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some places could be unchanged
such
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as
,
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Road and bus
stop
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stops
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in the future.
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with, the footpath in the almost centre of the map and the garden are going to be diminished in 2000, and these destroyed areas are changed into various types of facilities.
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, the parking area will be doubled in size (from 4 to 8 places). Look at the right side of the map, there is 3 room for taking lessons
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this
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number will be 5 in the given second college sites. the reception will be bigger than now and will be located in different regions of the
school
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. Lunch area, restroom and library will be built in the other venues at the
school
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. The college does not have a shopping area,
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,
this
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building will be constructed on the top of the right side of the
school
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in 2020.
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, the road and the bus station will remain stable in the same venue.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words school with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Layout
  • Structure
  • Design
  • Facilities
  • Expansion
  • Renovation
  • Development
  • Aesthetics
  • Functionality
  • Enhancement
  • Sustainability
  • Efficiency
  • Adaptability
  • Capacity
  • Optimization
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