The diagrams below show the present building of a college and the plan for changes to the college site in the future
The maps illustrate how
school
territory will be changed in 2020.
Overall
, the number of classrooms and car park areas will be increased whereas
some places could be unchanged such
as,
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stop
in the future.
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To begin
with, the footpath in the almost centre of the map and the garden are going to be diminished in 2000, and these destroyed areas are changed into various types of facilities. For example
, the parking area will be doubled in size (from 4 to 8 places). Look at the right side of the map, there is 3 room for taking lessons whereas
this
number will be 5 in the given second college sites. the reception will be bigger than now and will be located in different regions of the school
. Lunch area, restroom and library will be built in the other venues at the school
.
The college does not have a shopping area, however
, this
building will be constructed on the top of the right side of the school
in 2020. Additionally
, the road and the bus station will remain stable in the same venue.Submitted by gficnm
on
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