Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Governments should spend proper

money

on

railways

and

roads

Now adays

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, governments all around the world are making efforts to build more

railways

, especially high-speed

railways

. Is that reasonable? In my opinion, the answer is it depends. If the

railways

which

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are being built in large cities, flat

areas

, that will be effective and

economic

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, because the large population will make full use the

the

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facilities and the convenient natural conditions will make trains run much faster.

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, China has spent lots of

money

on high-speed

railways

between Beijing and Tianjin, and between Beijing and Shanghai, which are busier and faster than other

railways

in China. One of the reasons is that these

areas

have bigger

population

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populations

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and the land is much evener than

other

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in other

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parts

in

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of

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the country.

However

, in

the

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mountainous

areas

,

roads

might be more important and useful than

railways

. We all know that

roads

have

uncomparable

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adventages

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advantages

than

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railways

——more convenient, more flexible, cost less, etc. In the western parts of China,

such

as Xinjiang, Tibet,

Qinghai

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and Qinghai

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, which have broader lands or deserts and

less

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people,

roads

seems

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to be more useful than

railways

and the government should spend more

money

on building more qualified

roads

. All in all, the

governments

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decisions might have pros and cons, and the wisest decision is not to put all the

money

in one basket. So, the government should spend proper

money

both on

railways

and

roads

based on the situational conditions in different

areas

.