The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map displays the layout of a
town
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by name
Garlsdon
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. In the blueprint, two areas depict the tentative sites for the construction of the supermarket. In all, the industrial area is located at the heart of
Garlsdon
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which has a population of 65,000 people. To the North and South of the industrial area lie the residential complexes. One of the plots(S2) is located in the
Town
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Centre.
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, the Railway line runs from North West through the centre of the
town
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to South East. The
Town
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Centre is a no-traffic zone. Three roads move away from
Garlsdon
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to Hindon, Bransdon and Cransdon. Hindon located North West of
Garlsdon
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at 12km has a community of 10,000 people.
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, Bransdon (16km) and Cransdon(25km) lie in the South West and South East respectively. The former has a population density of 15,000 and the latter 29,000. In comparison to all the neighbouring towns,
Garlsdon
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has the maximum number of inhabitants. The other site for the supermarket is planned to be in the countryside, situated at the north Weat in the outskirts in between the railroad and the road leading to Hindon.
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  • map
  • town
  • supermarket
  • site
  • overview
  • possible
  • transportation
  • access
  • surrounding
  • facilities
  • population
  • density
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