You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after the six years old child. Write a letter to the parents. in your letter explain why you would like the job Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ * Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear my parents I hope you always have a great time with each other and I missed to you a lot. Actually, I want to live six months with a family carrying their child, who is six years old.It is interesting to know، that I see their request in an advertisement for an Australian magazine. So, if I can have their standard of a nurse for carrying their child, I will acquire a sufficient salary and a free place for living, so, my costs will be reduced. Since I am a lover of children and I have some experience with carrying a child, I tend to accept their requests.

Also

this

kind of experience is related to my future job. Eventually, I mentioned to you, I will have some free time especially, in weekends, when I will visit you after their allowance. But, if they tend to spend more time with them, I comply to alter their schedule. But, I assure you, that it will not be harmful to continuing my lessons.

Finally

, I hope to visit you sooner and I thank you for considering my condition. lover you

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

189 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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