the map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbition and planne of future development of the site

the map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbition and planne of future development of the site
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The two maps show an industrial place in the country of Norbition
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and planned future development of the site. In the first map, a river runs from the west to the east in the north of
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field
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, north of which is farmland but on the other side is the industrial
field
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. In the middle ,there is a round place with two exits,the exits all link to the main roads.In the west of
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industrial
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is the town . In the second map, a new exit to the north and connect a road in apply front of some houses. On the west of the
field
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, there will be a few houses and shops. In the east of the
field
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, there will be a playground ,and a new build
field
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has a medical centre and a school application in the east of the medical centre. From these two maps I can know with the technological development and application of social development the town and a small
field
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can be changed a lot the industrial
field
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can be changed into a fantastic
field
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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