“Prison is the only truly effective form of punishment, because it separates criminals from society.” To what extent do you support this view?

It is true that the most common way to punish those committing mistakes is to transfer them to jail as they can be differentiated from the outside world.

This

phenomenon carries not only negative but

also

positive consequences.

Therefore

,

this

essay will discuss both perspectives. On the one hand, there are some drawbacks

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the mentioned trend.

Initially

, prison can be a barrier for

people

to reconnect with society. There are many individuals coming out

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prison and want to live a normal life, having an ordinary job but their past makes them different from others. Citizens may not have a good impression of them, be scared and they will gradually be isolated from the community and it will be a challenge for them to live in harmony with the surroundings.

Moreover

, in some situations, offenders may have the thought of opposing when being trapped.

As a result

, it will take them a long time to turn to a good person and they may reoffend when going out because of their unstable mental.

On the other hand

, despite

such

grave issues, there are some optimistic effects.

To begin

with, the jail can teach criminals plenty of things. Prisoners can engage themselves in many

occupation

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training classes which can help them to find

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suitable job to earn a living. Plus, many moral lessons teaching how to become a citizen with

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personality are

also

organized.

Consequently

, lawbreakers will realize, have deep thought about their mistakes and convert into kind residents serving the community.

For example

, my

neighbor

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used to spend an amount of time living in jail. After being released, he became a tutor teaching for homeless children.

Furthermore

, keeping

people

who commit crimes out of the world can save themselves and

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in

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that place.

This

activity can prevent them from

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the surrounding world, which

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them from mental and physical injury and the prisoners will not mislead

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patterns. In conclusion,

while

the detrimental effects

such

as criminals can be quarantined from society and having harmful mental health, the uptrend outcomes, namely protecting

people

and conveying offenders into good

people

can balance the negative.