The graph show changes in spending habits of people in thw uk between 1971 and 2001.

The pie chart illustrates the purchase habits of individuals in the United Kingdom between 1971 and 2001.

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being

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cars

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were the biggest exchange in the given period.

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,

food

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after that whilst all the other staff were lost

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chare in the sales. The three biggest things in 1971 were

food

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,

cars

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, and petrol, with 22%, and 10%, respectively.

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increased their share to under a half 43%.

food

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Saw a notable decrease to 14%

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, petrol

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dropped to 8% in the year 2001.

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replaced

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as the first highest Sales in 20ol. The remaining fourth comparators,

restaurants

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, furniture, a book, and computers. According

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data, computers and restaurants rose from 7/ and 2%

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to 14% and 12% throughout the years.

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this

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, book and furniture dropped from 9% and 6% to 8%, and 1%

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, the

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part of the pie chart was the books