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Some people think that subjects like arts, music, drama and creative writing contribute more towards a child's overall development. The school curriculum should provide more time for these subjects to be taught if the school wants all-round development of children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays,
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 development concerns everyone. Some would argue that in order to enhance
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overall
 development,
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imbibing
 with arts, drama, music and creative writing contribute
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 the development
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 others think it could not be enough. In my opinion, I believe providing more time for these activities is a complicated problem which might arise a contentious fight
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 parents. On the one hand, embedding these
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activites
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activities
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 timetable might be a good point to start but it will have an effect if there is a lack of other aspects
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 as time for main subjects and examinations. First of all, arts and drama are for nothing if students have no time to practice.
Moreover
, performing music and creative writing is a daily life process and a
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 requires us to keep our motivation and
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For instance
, over 60% of the kids
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study crucial subjects less than 4 times a week and most of them have an excuse that they have other works to do and
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 their interest in
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Thus
, we need more solutions to keep kids more
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inclined
 towards the actual subject for them to understand the core principle of life.
On the other hand
, I believe that they should be exposed to all the activities happening
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around
 the school, a balance of all with proper goal setting yet keeping the
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envisaged
 future in mind.
To sum up
, I believe adding the arts, music and drama subjects to
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, students having a clear picture in mind should be abandoned towards their
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 of interest, making
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separate
 plans for selected students to avail the benefits.
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