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the top priority of businesses is making money, and they do not need to have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree

#priority #businesses #money #responsibilities
On the one hand, companies survive and flourish
the
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 money they make. Companies not only have to spend expenses
such
 as hiring personnel,premises, legal and insurance.
Therefore
 investors and
work generating
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 income are the top priority.
According to
 the U.S Small Business Administration, the average cost to establish a micro-business is approximately 3000$,
whereas
 the estimated cost to initiate a home-based franchise 5000$.
Thus
 the fact that they have to be socially responsible is an exception because the amount generated and the amount of money for companies to invest are quite large.
On the other hand
, there is no distinction between individuals and businesses regarding their ethical responsibilities. Given that social evil, businesses
also
 share equal accountability with governments for society's betterment.
For example
, the Vietnamese Youtube channel"Quang Linh Vlogs" has received enthusiastic support from both Vietnam and Angolans. In the recordings, Linh and his team instruct local Angolans on how to grow vegetables and raises livestock Linh launched a social project to assist 5000 underprivileged children in school by renovating and equipping classrooms. They proved that it is more humanitarian for work to contribute to society than to maximize revenue. In summary,
while
 I agree that making money is the top priority for employment, they should
also
 contribute to society within their reasonable limits.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • profit maximization
  • economic development
  • Corporate Social Responsibility (CSR)
  • shareholders
  • moral obligation
  • reputation
  • customer loyalty
  • sustainable business models
  • accountability
  • ethical practices
  • regulations
  • consumer expectations
  • economic sustainability
  • stakeholders
  • social impact
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