Nowadays online shopping is extremely popular. Discuss the impact of it on the environment and on people who lost their jobs because of it.
In
this
present era extreamly
change day by day because Correct your spelling
extremely
the
technology upgraded Correct article usage
apply
as well as
this
effected
Correct your spelling
affected
on
Change preposition
apply
individuals
Change noun form
individuals'
individual's
lifestyle
Fix the agreement mistake
lifestyles
However
, online shoppoing
is Correct your spelling
shopping
most
popular in Correct article usage
the most
modern
era. So, Add an article
the modern
This
essay discuss
which bad impact on Change the verb form
discusses
environment
and Add an article
the environment
also
individuals
jobs.
Let's begin with, Fistly
, Correct your spelling
First
Individuals
are getting very busy in their life due to
job
or business and Correct pronoun usage
their job
some
many personal reasons Correct quantifier usage
apply
Although
, when they free
on weekends so they Add a missing verb
are free
like
spend their time with their families and loves Add the particle
tolike
one
as felt tired after work so they did not like to shopping by stores and shops. Correct pronoun usage
ones
Therefore
, Individuals
prefer shopping by
online mode Change preposition
apply
while
they order essay
Fix the agreement mistake
essays
on
one click, Change preposition
in
Moreover
, They have number
of variety available on websites and very affordable Change the article
a number
the number
rate
Fix the agreement mistake
rates
as well as
they save their
Correct pronoun usage
apply
suspicous
time. Correct your spelling
suspicious
auspicious
To
instance, People are facing obesity problems because they Change preposition
For
does
not go Change the verb form
do
for
Change preposition
to
markets
.
Fix the agreement mistake
market
Secondly
, Now numerous websites available
on Add a missing verb
are available
Add an article
the internet
internet
for shopping Capitalize word
Internet
such
Amazon
, Change preposition
as Amazon
ebay
, Correct your spelling
eBay
Correct word choice
and flipcart
flipcart
these companies deliver their products very safely Correct your spelling
Flipkart
flipchart
their
customers that's why these companies used huge Change preposition
to their
boxs
and carry Correct your spelling
boxes
box
bages
use for packing Correct your spelling
bags
for
goods. Change preposition
apply
while
, cargoes percel
Correct your spelling
parcel
also
delivery
courier till customer house and whole courier companies Replace the word
delivered
such
as DHL, Firefox
, these are use trucks, cars, Correct word choice
and Firefox
plains
for Correct word choice
and plains
transprotations
. Correct your spelling
transportation
transportations
For example
, Governments clear all garbages
of Correct subject-verb agreement
garbage
wastage
of packaging and Replace the word
waste
according to
past years from 2010 to 2020 in
huge used Change preposition
apply
petromiums
for Correct your spelling
premiums
transpratation
, It was increased Correct your spelling
transportation
transplantation
40
%. Change preposition
by 40
However
, Delivery transportation created lot
of rusk on roads. In Change the article
a lot
additionally
, It is Replace the word
addition
bad
Correct article usage
a bad
effecting
on Replace the word
effect
environment
and pollution in Correct article usage
the environment
air
.
Add an article
the air
On the other hand
, During the
online shopping, People are suffering Correct article usage
apply
to
Change preposition
from
unemployements
as far as malls and shops vendor gets lost in business they prefer Correct your spelling
unemployment
sell
by Add the particle
to sell
onilne
, So, they Correct your spelling
online
did
not able to pay salaries Change the verb
were
for
their employees So what, Change preposition
to
individuals
and youngester
Correct your spelling
youngster
youngsters
unemployee
and bad impact on our economy.
In conclusion, Not only whole people like to go shopping onlineCorrect your spelling
unemployed
Correct word choice
apply
while
,
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apply
plethora
of Add an article
a plethora
the plethora
individuals
like to go shopping to
markets and stores because Change preposition
in
Change preposition
of they
they
physical presence shopping. Correct pronoun usage
their
overall
, there number of benifits
of online shopping.Correct your spelling
benefits
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