The flow chart shows 'trampling', the negative effect of tourists walking in the countryside for the environment.

The flow chart shows 'trampling', the negative effect of tourists walking in the countryside for the environment.
Given flow chart provide information about how tourists are destroying our environment by trampling.
Overall
, the trampling process has a significant impact on two components of
environment
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the environment
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which is vegetation
damaging
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damage
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and
soil
compacting.
To begin
with, damaged greenery leads to
variety
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a variety
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of consequences.
In
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result
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of
this
plants become weaker and are not able to reproduce and grow.
Consequently
, plants are reducing faster. When it comes to
soil
compacting,
due to
becoming hard underfoot air and water hardly can penetrate into the ground, which leads to Its reduction.
In addition
, it
also
affects the ability of plants to grow and multiply. Low water and air content in the
soil
is
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causing erosion increasing, and,
moreover
, water is running off the land, what
additionally
is causing the greenery
reduce
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.
Finally
, both decreasing vegetation and
water’s
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water
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running off the land are the reason
of
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numerous erosions and decreased quality of
soil
and vegetation.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words soil with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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