Some countries have legal ages at which people can drink. Other countries believe not have strict laws is a better policy. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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It is considered by some
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that alcohol can be drunk in some countries in legal
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there are others who think countries which do not have
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strict
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is a better policy. In my opinion, I believe that legal
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ages
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for
drink
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is the best policy,
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in laws is
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essential.
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the one hand, many think life
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safe because of legal for
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This
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is because, when
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are drunk, they are not on their minds, so they perform dangerous actions for their selves and the environment.
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, if they are drunk and drive a car they could have an accident which could be hurt for both sides.
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, drunk
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have nuclear vision, especially at night.
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, if there
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no legal
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for
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, it would be more dangerous and
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huge
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impact
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the
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societies. So
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people
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drink
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will increase
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social pests.
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, having
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convenient
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is a better policy. Because
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much strict
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law is really bad in some moments which
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taken
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freedom from citizens.
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, when
people
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depressed
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the only way to enjoy and get better is
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drink
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to drink
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,
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, if
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drink
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drinking
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is totally prohibited they will
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more. Some
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find
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drink
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drinking
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as
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way to relax from
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of life. To put
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simply,
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drink
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the drink
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is important for some
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categories
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of
people
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even if they are
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, and the government can not stop the addiction or
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drink
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, because it leads to
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problems. In conclusion, having legal
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for
drink
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and strict laws are important to have a safe environment. If the government put more
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on illegal staff,
people
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would be strict enough.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Legal drinking age
  • Underage drinking
  • Health repercussions
  • Addiction
  • Drunk-driving
  • Responsible drinking
  • Forbidden fruit
  • Social rituals
  • Public health
  • Safety framework
  • Risks of alcohol
  • Cultural differences
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